Monday, September 29, 2008

poetry under construction

This time I mean the title literally.

I was working on this piece and thought I'd share. It's early yet...

Title: If you don't

If you don't hear the understanding in my words
A reflection of your every want, need and whim
Know that your passions penetrate my skin
I can't please you...

If you don't cherish the essence of my spirit
Appreciate the gift of just being near it
Delighting in my smiles and forgiving my flaws
I can't be free with you...

If you don't take the time to get to know my mind
Show concern for my dreams and aspirations
Embracing my quirks without hesitation
I can't compliment you...

If you don't see the fire in my eyes
Replicated in the warmth between my thighs
Compounded by the desire in my tone
I can't show you...

If you don't find a way to open up
Allow yourself to receive the love I'm trying to offer
Swallow past hurts and become a bit softer
I can't.